新ACT作文改革范文评析

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2015年9月开始，ACT考试的写作部分进行了变革，对考生写作的新的要求：首先，要对题目中给出的Perspective1,2,3进行分析和评述;其次要亮明并阐述自己的观点;另外还要结合自己的观点和给出的三个观点之间的关系进行讨论和陈述。下面以两篇样文为例，逐一为大家进行详细分析。同学们要仔细阅读哦!(注：两篇样文均出自官方，考生们可以充分学习，但切忌抄录原句。)
　　ACT考试官方改革后的写作部分，推出了新样题及评分标准。新的评分标准由4项指标组成：
　　1.观点及分析Ideas and Analysis
　　2.对观点从深度和广度上的支撑 Development and Support
　　3.文章结构Organization
　　4.语言运用Language Use
　　4项分别判分，写作的最后得分是这四项的综合分。
　　
　　一、开篇分析：
　　I 篇首段：
　　It is no secret that today’s workforce no longer consists entirely of people. Rather, machines are being developed to complete many of the tasks which humans have traditionally done. This can greatly increase productivity and efficiency of simple, repetitive tasks. Many people view this as a great positive and point out that it leads to a more uniform and less expensive product which is better for everyone. However, some people are more wary of this popular trend of automating the workforce and question whether this progress is truely (并非笔误，是样文的真实重现) positive. Their concerns, though, are outweighed by the benefits these machines offer. (108字)
　　首段解析：第一篇文章的首段行文很稳，It is no secret that…句型展开，到Rather引领，写作的层次逻辑感清晰可见。然后They can…陈述事实，Many people句描述一般民众对智能机械的正向认识，However句展示一部分民众持有的疑惑和担忧(负面的认识)，最后一句用though拉回来，用了一个表权衡的短语 are outweighed by …指出智能机械的益处胜于民众的担忧。
　　II 篇首段：
　　Advances in technology have become so widely accepted in today’s culture that very few people are willing to pause to consider the consequences. People get so excited about what new technologies can offer that they forget to question whether there might be any negative effects. Without caution and deliberation, replacing the natural with the mechanic